is not flowers and hearts everywhere,
love is more than two person together,
It represent suffering, sharing, fighting and
feeling with the other person.
Love is a jail you cannot scape,
it symbolizes chains with an unbreakable shape.
When you fall on hands of love,
you will never be allow to say no.
No scape, no feeling, no light,
no respect no available fight.
You´ve written a very powerful poem. Your point of view announces itself from the title and then is developed in a number of interesting metaphors and images. Very well done!
ResponderEliminarA couple of corrections:
Stanza 1: It is not flowers and hearts everywhere,/love is more than two persons together.
Stanza 2: the word escape takes an "e" at the beginning./ When you fall in the hands of love/ You will never be allowed to say no.
Congratulations on your use of vocabulary!
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